William

It good but I think could be better with either more or less background. More would better set the scene, less would better isolate whereas as it is it does neither to my eye at any rate

I find the extraneous detail distracting and unclear
 
It good but I think could be better with either more or less background. More would better set the scene, less would better isolate whereas as it is it does neither to my eye at any rate

I find the extraneous detail distracting and unclear
I agree with what you say.
 
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